In the book Chocolate Fever by: Robert Kimmel Smith. Henry and Mac were in the car and some people hijacked the car that Mac was driving. So they drove off with Henry and Mac in the back of the car. Then pulled up to the bank going the speed limit and stopped. When they walked up to the door a lot of happy licking dogs came out of the door.
Jacob you are starting to include the important events in the story, but you are also including some distracting details (happy licking dogs coming out of the door). What would help is if you use the Somebody, Wanted, But, Then, So organizer we've been using in class.
My book is chocolate feaver by Robert Kimmel Smith Henry, Wanted, the thives to get out of the car. Then,a guy named Louie had a gun by Henry head. But, Henry got to Louie hide out and was still Im the car. So, Henry came up with a idea.
Henry and Mac, Wanted, to get out of the car.But,henry and mac did not have the keys.Then,Henry and mac clamid to the front sit to get out.End,Henry and Mac got out of the car. Demarion Davis
Demarion your summaries were fantastic! You did a nice job including all of the important events and I can tell you used the SWBTS organizer that we have been using in class. Keep up the great work!
in chapter 9 henary was traying to grt out of a car with his freaind. then there were two poiles . next the polies chout the real theves. it end by the truck rombledto the right.in chapter 10 mac and henary wanted to lrt the dogs out. then hewas lafing so hard he coldent do any thing. then he had stoped. it ended by they were giving out candy. by. aniyah j.
Aniyah I can tell you are trying to use the SWBTS organizer that we used in class, but just make sure you use the organizer when you are writing your summary paragraph. Also please check your spelling. There are several words here that you can spell, but you may not be looking over them before you post your blog.
HENRRY WANTED TO GET OUT OF THE TRUCK BUT HE AND HIS FREND MAC GOT STUCK IN THE TRUCK SO THEY GOT UP ON THE TOP BUNK THEN THEY WHERE AT THE SECRET HID OUT
Corey you did a wonderful job using the organizer to write your summary paragraph. I would look through the chapter to make sure all of these events actually happened. You may be mixing a couple of things together. Also, could you not type in all caps next time? Online when you do that it looks like you are yelling.
In the book Henery wonted to not be notest. But they faled and robbers came with guns. Then they ran to the back seat. So unhappy theves where ahed as the truck rumbld thrugh the night. This is chapter 9 by the way.
Henery wonted to get out of the truble that he was in. But he coldint. Then dogs came and licked Henery. So he was out of the trable that he was in
Edwin you have really improved with using the SWBTS organizer to write your summary paragraph! You are including most of the important events that happened in the story, which is the whole idea of summary writing. Please go back and look over Chapter 10 again though. You say that the dogs licking Henry is how his problem of being in trouble go solved, but I don't think that was true.
In the book Chocolate Fever by: Robert Kimmel Smith. Henry and Mac were in the car and some people hijacked the car that Mac was driving. So they drove off with Henry and Mac in the back of the car. Then pulled up to the bank going the speed limit and stopped. When they walked up to the door a lot of happy licking dogs came out of the door.
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henry and and mac did get hijacked and was in the back of the car so i think you diid read both chapters BY DEMARION
DeleteI FEEL THAT IN BROTH OF THE CHAPTER WAS BROTH. ALIKE BECAUSE THERE BOTH ABOUT HENRY AND MAC GOT HIJACKED.and was all about that by demarion davis
DeleteJacob you are starting to include the important events in the story, but you are also including some distracting details (happy licking dogs coming out of the door). What would help is if you use the Somebody, Wanted, But, Then, So organizer we've been using in class.
DeleteMy book is chocolate feaver by Robert Kimmel Smith Henry, Wanted, the thives to get out of the car. Then,a guy named Louie had a gun by Henry head. But, Henry got to Louie hide out and was still Im the car. So, Henry came up with a idea.
ReplyDeleteHenry and Mac, Wanted, to get out of the car.But,henry and mac did not have the keys.Then,Henry and mac clamid to the front sit to get out.End,Henry and Mac got out of the car. Demarion Davis
i agree because they did wated to get out of the car
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aniyah j.
Demarion your summaries were fantastic! You did a nice job including all of the important events and I can tell you used the SWBTS organizer that we have been using in class. Keep up the great work!
DeleteAlso Demarion, very nice work using complete sentences (no run ons!). I might have to take way your title soon.
Deletein chapter 9 henary was traying to grt out of a car with his freaind. then there were two poiles . next the polies chout the real theves. it end by the truck rombledto the right.in chapter 10 mac and henary wanted to lrt the dogs out. then hewas lafing so hard he coldent do any thing. then he had stoped. it ended by they were giving out candy.
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aniyah j.
IT WAS NOT POILES MAN IT WAS HI JACKERS DEMARION
DeleteAniyah I can tell you are trying to use the SWBTS organizer that we used in class, but just make sure you use the organizer when you are writing your summary paragraph. Also please check your spelling. There are several words here that you can spell, but you may not be looking over them before you post your blog.
DeleteI would do the same thing that henry and mac did and wanted to get out of the car.
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HENRRY WANTED TO GET OUT OF THE TRUCK BUT HE AND HIS FREND MAC GOT STUCK IN THE TRUCK SO THEY GOT UP ON THE TOP BUNK THEN THEY WHERE AT THE SECRET HID OUT
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DeleteCorey you did a wonderful job using the organizer to write your summary paragraph. I would look through the chapter to make sure all of these events actually happened. You may be mixing a couple of things together. Also, could you not type in all caps next time? Online when you do that it looks like you are yelling.
DeleteIn the book Henery wonted to not be notest. But they faled and robbers came with guns. Then they ran to the back seat. So unhappy theves where ahed as the truck rumbld thrugh the night. This is chapter 9 by the way.
ReplyDeleteHenery wonted to get out of the truble that he was in. But he coldint. Then dogs came and licked Henery. So he was out of the trable that he was in
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edwin
Edwin you have really improved with using the SWBTS organizer to write your summary paragraph! You are including most of the important events that happened in the story, which is the whole idea of summary writing. Please go back and look over Chapter 10 again though. You say that the dogs licking Henry is how his problem of being in trouble go solved, but I don't think that was true.
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